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March 23,2009

潭紀事

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失足跌
入一池深邃無力
呼救泅泳
安詳地沉沒向下
向下
向下
沒有底

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Just like a nightmare to me, because I cannot swim! So peaceful and so helpless!
Posted by manda at March 24,2009 20:01

Hello manda：

或許無助。

不過就放開了一路沉去
或許也不壞

Wolf 090325
Posted by 臥斧 at March 25,2009 00:47

也許旁邊有釣魚線可以拉～
Posted by NGC5897 at March 25,2009 01:02

Hello NGC5897：

可別把釣客給拉下來了

Wolf 090328
Posted by 臥斧 at March 28,2009 20:42


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